English Poem- chased

[نبضات]

Well today.. I'm posting here this poem which i wrote recently
I know that its strange to do that here
but i would like to share it with you, even if it was not good poem
hope u like it all






Somewhere in between my soul and heart

I feel you; I touch your smiling face

I drift with you to beyond myself

To the deepest spot that I will never reach

Believing that you completing my faith

I don't Know why, I keep deny my feeling in all ways

I guess I am scared to surrender my heart

As it will gently be trapped in your maze

I am afraid to declare the love I have

I am longed for you, for my shelter, my space

To hug me so warm, to keep me in your arms

To make me crazy, lazy and a amazed

Save me from your love arrows

Free me from your charm.. I am chased

 

[ياسر خطاب]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نبضات

Well today.. I'm posting here this poem which i wrote recently
I know that its strange to do that here
but i would like to share it with you, even if it was not good poem
hope u like it all






Somewhere in between my soul and heart

I feel you; I touch your smiling face

I drift with you to beyond myself

To the deepest spot that I will never reach

Believing that you completing my faith

I don't Know why, I keep deny my feeling in all ways

I guess I am scared to surrender my heart

As it will gently be trapped in your maze

I am afraid to declare the love I have

I am longed for you, for my shelter, my space

To hug me so warm, to keep me in your arms

To make me crazy, lazy and a amazed

Save me from your love arrows

Free me from your charm.. I am chased

miss nabadat :thanks for this mooring its like firouz songs

 

[نبضات]

Well I will reply both in Arabic and english

I really appreciate your reply Mr.Yasser.
Your presence Is a million worth.

Bless you


أخي ياسر خطاب
:
دوما وأبدا
لك حضور راقي
عذب عطر
اسعدتي تواجدك
كنسيم الصباح

 

[سعد سيف]

.Your poem is really nice and I find it very interesting
But it it will be highly appreciated if it is written in Arabic & English.
so other members will be able to understand and give their comments
We expect you to contribute more poem as you have the talent
in doing rythmic poems like the one you did
Good luck & more power

 

[منى الصفار]

I loved your poem
it's a nice one, although I do I gree that it will be more appreciated if it was translated to Arabic.
I believe you are the best person who could translate your feelings
looking forward to read it again





دمتِ بود

 

[نبضات]

Dear Muna,
I think it's my beatiful luck to read your reply here
It's my honur to translate it... and your are right

i already translated it above
hope you enjoy it as well in Arabic

Regards,

:

الغالية منى الصفار؛؛

مروركـ عطر سيدتي ا
وأبهجني وزاد متصفحي نقاء
وقد قمت بترجمتها
لعيونكم فقط

لكي التحية

 

[نسرين الأحمد]

My sister nabadat


Thank you for the poem wonderful
and very wonderful words and once like

with all my respect

SeeeeeE YoU

 

[نبضات]

Dear Sahari
Thank u for calling me your sister , I really appriciate it
I'm glad that you find it wonderful sweetie, still i found your reply more wonderfull

Thank you once again for being here

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عزيزتي سهاري
لي الشرف لمروركـ العطر
وتواجدك الخلاب
الذي أسعدني
لكـ الود